{"id":39600,"date":"2017-07-03T13:50:21","date_gmt":"2017-07-03T20:50:21","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/world.edu\/?p=39600"},"modified":"2017-07-03T13:50:21","modified_gmt":"2017-07-03T20:50:21","slug":"youre-so-vague","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/world.edu\/youre-so-vague\/","title":{"rendered":"You\u2019re so vague\u2026"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img fetchpriority=\"high\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/world.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/07\/learning.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"680\" height=\"332\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-39601\" srcset=\"https:\/\/world.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/07\/learning.jpg 680w, https:\/\/world.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/07\/learning-250x122.jpg 250w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 680px) 100vw, 680px\" \/><br \/>\nIt is important when writing about research to be specific. And by writing about research I mean writing about methods in a journal article, writing methods in a thesis or journal article, writing about research \u00a0design in a research bid. See what I did there? Specific, not vague.<\/p>\n<p>Now I\u2019m guessing you\u00a0<em>do<\/em> know that examiners and peer reviewers always look to find the details in design and methods. They search for N = number of people, things and places, the times you are in your research location and the number of transcripts you are working on. If you don\u2019t have these N details about the research, your chapter, paper or bid will fall down.<\/p>\n<p>However, these are not the only places where it\u2019s easy to be imprecise. You can also be vague and woolly in two other places \u2013 writing about what you want to do, and writing about your results. And, like not having N info, lack of attention to details here can cost you too.<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li><strong>What you want to do<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>If you are doing an intervention study, design or action research, or a trial, you might find yourself using these words \u2013 improve, enhance, reduce, lessen, change. Problem. These are imprecise terms. The point of intervention studies is that you can see if you have achieved what you set out to do. So the words <i>improve, enhance, reduce, lessen, change<\/i> really don\u2019t cut it.\u00a0 You need to do more work on what these these terms mean.<\/p>\n<p>Let\u2019s take an example.<\/p>\n<p>If you wanted to <em>improve<\/em> something \u2013 say the ways in which doctoral researchers approach literature reviews \u2013 then you need to make <i>improve<\/i> much more explicit. Does <i>improve<\/i> mean that DRs<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>read more or less \u2013 and if so how much,<\/li>\n<li>read more often \u2013 and if so how often,<\/li>\n<li>read regularly \u2013 and is that everyday, every week, or what,<\/li>\n<li>read differently \u2013 and if so how,<\/li>\n<li>write about the literatures differently \u00a0\u2013 and if so how,<\/li>\n<li>take better notes \u00a0\u2013 and what does better look like,<\/li>\n<li>read out of their field \u00a0\u2013 and does that mean specific field or any fields and what do they do when they do this\u2026<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>and you can keep adding possibilities I\u2019m sure.\u00a0You get the point. You have to say what you mean in order to see if your intervention has \u2018worked\u2019.<\/p>\n<ol start=\"2\">\n<li><strong>Your results<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>There are lots of places in reporting results where you can get very imprecise. Like saying <i>lots of places<\/i>. Words like <i>lots, many, few, the minority, the majority, most, frequently, rarely, often, sometimes<\/i>, are all classic instances where imprecision takes over. Problem. How is the reader to know what you mean?<\/p>\n<p>An example or two will help.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>What do we mean by\u00a0<i>often<\/i>\u00a0if we say \u00a0\u201cDoctoral researchers reported often feeling out of their depth.\u201d What is <i>often<\/i> \u2013 once a day? more? every five minutes? Or is it only once a week? There is a significant difference between these versions of often, and yet the term applies equally to all of the options.<\/li>\n<li>What do we mean when we say the minority \u2013 \u201cA minority of doctoral researchers reported that they enjoyed the PhD process.\u201d What is the <i>minority<\/i> \u2013 one less than 50%? A third, a quarter, only one or two? There is a significant difference between these versions of minority and yet the term applies equally to all of the options.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Examiners and reviewers almost always pick up vagueness (two or three might not care but the rest of us do). While examiners and reviewers might let you get away with one or two instances of opaque, unclear and unfocused writing in results, we\/they\u2019ll not accept much more. And we\/they\u2019ll just outright reject any muddiness and obscurity in research design.<\/p>\n<p>And even though I\u2019m a person who doesn\u2019t like rules, there <em>is<\/em> a maxim here. When writing about design, objectives and goals, results and claims, don\u2019t \u2018make vague\u2019. \u00a0Through a text darkly ain\u2019t on. Clear the fog away and say exactly what you mean.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It is important when writing about research to be specific. 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